Updated flat plan

Taking in what was had been noticed on my old flat plan by my class mate as she peer assessed my work last week, I have re-created my flat plan (only the front cover and double page spread) as that is what I also thought my work needed improvement and tried to follow the Hip Hop/R'n'B conventions. Why I also had to re-create my flat plan for my front cover and double page spread is because the male artist I tried to get in contact with did not contact back which is why I had to find an alternative model to be my 'artist' who is female so I had to change the images I drew.

Here is what I came up with for my potential front cover and double page spread:

Front cover

Double Page Spread